This is a good start because it does express my position without announcing it; unfortunately, it is vague and general and therefore ineffective.
It is not all that exciting for my reader, and it leaves my audience too many unanswered questions. Asking questions about the topic is a great way to find more specific information to include in my thesis.
Don't settle for three pages of just skimming the surface.
The opposite of a focused, narrow, crisp thesis is a broad, sprawling, superficial thesis.
You should provide a thesis early in your essay -- in the introduction, or in longer essays in the second paragraph -- in order to establish your position and give your reader a sense of direction.
How To Solve An Algebra Problem - Thesis Statement In Literature Papers
Tip: In order to write a successful thesis statement: Your thesis statement should be as clear and specific as possible.
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How will I continue the discussion of something that cannot be disputed?
It can easily be proven that George Will did in fact write about equality in the United States, so I don’t really have a strong position because it is simply a fact.